Get rid of the crappy stuff!

 

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'Oh, and get rid of the crappy stuff' was a famous quote from the late Steve Jobs when asked for advice by Nike CEO Mark Parker about Nike's products.'He was absolutely right', said Parker, 'We had to edit'.

Editing is what we all need to do, dear Ladies & Gentlemen. All the time. In our personal life, in our professional life, when choosing what to say, what to act on, what to buy and what to eat and what to write. 

If you are a public speaker, a presenter or a wannabe TED speaker this is one of the most important skills you need. The ability to get rid of the crappy stuff comes with age. It is one of the advantages of aging ;-) As you get older your ability to distinguish between crap and non crap increases hopefully. It is one of the advantages of aging ;-)

So, when you are looking for someone to help you prepare with an important presentation look for someone who will help you to cut the crappy stuff. Someone who has the ability and wisdom to ask the right questions.

  • What is your key message? 
  • Who is your audience?
  • What do you want your audience to do afterwards? 

After you have answered these questions you can sit down and begin writing your story. In writing the story make sure to cut the crap. 

Tell it from your perspective. 

Use short sentences

Pick the right words and let the story speak for itself. 

Do not belabor the point. Your audience is not stupid. 

Do not speak for more than 16 minutes. 

Why?

Anything worthwhile can be said in 18 minutes. (There's a reason a TED Talk is no longer than 18 minutes)

  • 2 minutes for your opening statement or provocative question
  • 12 minutes for the body of your story. Limit yourself to three points
  • 2 minutes for your conclusion, including a call to action 

But that is only 16 minutes you say. Indeed. You get two minutes 'grace' time. No one will look at his or her watch when you keep it short and sweet. On the contrary there’s a lot of power in brevity. Plus, if English is not your native tongue it will give you time to enunciate each syllable with care. This will make your speech clear. Non-native speakers often garble their words when they speak too fast.   

 

Visuals

If you like use visuals to illustrate your story make sure  the visuals are easy to read.

This means there is hardly any text, if any.

Let your images be bold, sharp and convey emotion. If you can't find good images, don't use any. Let your voice paint the picture. 

Vocal variety

Vocal variety is underused in public speaking. Go to any conference and you will be bored stiff by men droning on and on.The mere monotony of their voice will put you to sleep and the message, if there was one, will not stick. 

Pauses

The ability to remain silent is a true art. When you don't speak for 3 - 4 beats your audience sits up and takes notice. They want to know what comes next.  

Before you give it to them they will be able to absorb the impact of your last statement. Make sure the statement is relevant to your story. 

Pronunciation

This is of particular importance for non-native speakers of English. Ninety nine percent of all presentations, speeches and talks are given in English. English is the lingua franca of international communication. This will only increase. In China millions of people are working on learning how to speak clear English. English sounds are hard to produce for people raised in another language. The -th-, the -sh-, the end consonants -t- and -d-, the schwa, the -r- require different articulatory settings. You need to consciously practice these settings with tongue and mouth exercises. It's like exercising any muscle, practice makes perfect. Just find a good speech coach, who can help you by listening carefully to your pronunciation and who will make sound files for you to listen and repeat the words that may be problematic for you.

Intonation

Intonation: The use of changing pitch to convey syntactic information. Intonation is crucial in conveying meaning to your audience. The wrong intonation can result in misunderstanding or incomprehension on the part of your audience. Make sure you practice your speech aloud with the help of a speech coach who is intimately familiar with the intricacies of intonation, pitch, word and sentence stress.If you fail to prepare your presentation you increase the likelihood of giving a crappy presentation. Oh NO!

To wrap it up: 

  • Start on time
  • Keep editing (cut the crap)
  • Practice till you drop

 

PostScript TEDxDelft about speaking English and more

It has been two weeks since TEDxDelft took place in the imposing aula of Technical University Delft (TU)

 

Another succesful TEDx

Rob Speekenbrink and Simone de Jong can look back on a successful day.

Guests were treated to Interesting and varied program from geeks (as was to be expected in Delft, home of the Technical University) to government officials (Delfland Water Board) from poetry (Bauke Steenhuisen about producing consultant reports in the form of poetry) to purple prose (Musetta Blaauw following her dream of a large family)

Guests also received a few Show-and-Tell presentations most notably from veteran speaker and creator of Strand Beasts, Theo Jansen, and book designer Irma Boon, who is a master at structuring highly creative books but failed to structure  her TEDTalk. Luckily the audience was forgiving about her gaffes as a speaker and laughed heartily at her many pronouncements about the books she designed and delivered at breakneck speed. She is charming indeed. 

Location

The location was eminently suited to receive the 900 or so guests, mostly male, mostly in the 20-40 age range with a few exceptions here and there. There was a technical snafu at the registration but this was circumvented by allowing guests to just go to the auditorium and find a seat. 

The stage was draped in TED Red; (Pantone 485) with the TEDxDelft logo as a back drop. I love the logo where the words are made from collections of red objects. Very playful and effective. 

 

 

Entertainment

Entertainment was provided by   TTYPP iPhone Jam project. This team created a rather invasive audio cum visual intermezzo which, had it taken more time than it did, would have chased me from my seat. But I guess in Delft, home of the Technical University, one should not be too surprised by screeching and deafening sounds and cryptic images. 

There was also a preview of the TomTom opera: making 'music' with navigation devices and let navigation devices sing by composer Huba de Graaff. I was  surprised this ethereal looking woman created such unpleasant sounds while the images  were also devoid of any redeeming features. As with TTYPP I felt relieved when it was over. I guess my appreciation of opera ended with, say, Philip Glass' Satyagraha. I would love to work with Huba on her English but I am not sure if she would be interested in this.  As it was she read her answers to questions posed by Jasper van Kuijk from pieces of paper. Sometimes it is good, I think, to wait a bit and let the work ripen on the shelf before speaking about it. But perhaps, as an older person, I appreciate the power of aging and the wisdom it brings. This is not to say I don't appreciate the élan and energy of youth. On the contrary. I love it!

The best entertainment was presented by Progression Stunts is the largest group of specialists in the field of parkour, freerun, acrobatics, tricking, stunts and hand balancing in the Netherlands. It is always nice to see a bunch of able-bodied young men defy gravity by performing dangerous stunts. And they kept it short which was good because, as we know, too much of a good thing turns into its opposite. 

I would not have minded a musical intermezzo of say, a talented chamber quartet or an a capella group singing somt thirteenth century hymns or something like that. Maybe give it a new twist by incorporating modern technology. Something to think about for TEDxTheHague2012?

Meeting people during the breaks

The breaks were busy. There were a lot of folks mingling about. Plenty of good, plain food was provided on big table; pea soup, broodjes, croquettes and other Dutch fare. The catering was provided by Sodexo, probably the biggest catering company in The Netherlands. They did a good job and the people were friendly and accomodating. I especially liked the 'borrel' because that is when I had the most interesting encounters and actually bumped into some friends and acquintances from the world of TED. I did not meet as many new people, perhaps because the Dutch usually like to hang out with their friends and colleagues. I had one nice chat with a young woman about Musetta's talk about her wish for a fourth child after having her uterus removed. There was a conservatively dressed man sitting next to me who fled after I had playfully, I thought, admonished him for staring at a screen rather than connection with others. He quickly ran away and forgot to take his portfolio. Which we guarded for him until he came back to claim it. 

 

English

TEDxDelft proved it is still a tremendous challenge for most speakers to present in English. It is true that most well-educatied Dutch folks are ok when it comes to speaking English and that they could be so much better when they would invest some time (and money) into preparing their Talk. If I may give some pointers here:

1. Make sure you have a core message and a clear structure

2. Choose the right words, omit needless words

3. Practise your talk so it becomes part of you. Rehearse tricky words, know where the stress goes in the words and in the sentences. 

4. When you take the stage, pause for a moment before speaking. Look at the audience, create a sense of focus and anticipation. Pause frequently to let your words sink in. 

5. Make sure you have done your vocal and physical warm-ups beforehand so you release your nervous energy but retain the adrenaline necessary to power your speech.  

Of course I recommend that every speaker works with a Speech coach who specializes in English. ;-)

As Malcolm Gladwell says in his book Outliers you need 10.000 hours of practice to become a master. In Dutch we all know the expressions Oefening baart Kunst en Al doende leert men. So true. 

Room for improvement?

Just a couple of things:

1. Remind the audience to connect with new people during the breaks.

2. For the MC: shake hands with the speaker upon taking and leaving the stage. Rehearse this.

3. Make sure the speakers have water available. Sometimes speakers' mouths get dry and the mike makes this audible  

(speakers can also eat an apple beforehand, or bit the sides of their mouth during their talk)

 

All in all the organizers did an outstanding job. A lot of thought, preparation and teamwork went into creating this event. TEDxAmsterdam is up next this coming Friday. I look forward to it. 

P.S. 

I forgot to mention the outstanding Senz Umbrella. In RED! With a discrete TEDxDelf logo.

What a great gift! 

 

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And now a word from Olivia Schofield

"Giving a speech is just like creating a piece of choreography: it should have unexpected twists and turns that leave the audience inspired”.  

 

 

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From Toastmasters to TEDx; optimize your English!

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The last weeks have been busy. A wave of public speaking opportunities have come by.
There is TEDxDelft, followed by TEDxAmsterdam and TEDxAmsterdamWomen and a national Toastmasters Humorous Speech competition thrown in for good measure.
Toastmasters International is a worldwide community of people who come together every two weeks to practice their public speaking skills in a very structured way.
They work their way through the Competent Communication Manual at their own pace.
They prepare short speeches which they present to their club. Each speaker receives an evaluation in which the positives are highlighted and suggestions for improvement are given.
Speakers are free to chose the topic of their speeches.
There are also opportunities for improvisation where speakers are asked to speak 2 -3 minutes off the cuff.
After the CC manual has been completed speakers move on to advance manuals.
Twice a year there are competitions on a local, regional, national and international level.
My local toastmasters club, Toastmasters of The Hague is a vibrant international group with very diverse backgrounds.

Performing on an international podium
On the whole we see a trend of non-native English speakers who want to shine and share their story on an international stage. The world is getting smaller and people want to connect with each other across borders, oceans, cultures and languages. English is the lingua franca, like it or not and this will not change anytime soon. On the contrary, Chinese kids are learning English at increasingly yougn age.
 
Non-native English speakers must rise to the challenge.
Heavy regional or national accents are no longer cool. Why? Because in many instances they obscure the message. Misunderstandings arise and the story is quickly forgotten. Not a good thing if your idea is an idea worth spreading. Your message has to stick. So it has to be dynamic, to the point and gripping.

What challenge?
This it the challenge: To deliver a stellar speech or tell a gripping story in a language you learned later in life.
Non-native English speakers must rise to the challenge.

 Heavy regional or national accents are no longer cool.
Why?
Because in many instances they obscure the message. Misunderstandings arise and the story is quickly forgotten. Not a good thing if your idea is an idea worth spreading.
Your message has to stick. So it has to be dynamic, to the point and gripping.

Asking for coaching
A few of the TEDxDelft speakers have come to me for help.

Why did they come?
They came because they want to speak in clearly articulated English or because someone suggested they get in touch with me.

They came because they realize that the better they articulate the sounds of spoken English the better their message will be heard, rememberd and shared.

The Spoken word is as good as the Written Text
The text is the basic architecture on which your story hangs. 
If yo have a rickety architecture your story will not stick.
Foprget all that nonsens of erroneously cited Mehrabian research about body language and being yourself. That is balderdash. Words form the foundation of your talk. You can gesture all you want but if the words aren't there you won't have a talk. 
 
So, the spoken word starts with the written text.
When you write a story or a speech in your native language, say Dutch, it will not guarantee that is has the same impact it may have had in Dutch when you translate this story into English.
Often this is because the spoken language is entirely different from the language we use when writing. And this is how most Dutch speakers write their speech. When they try to tell their translated story they get lost in long sentences, often written in the passive form with lots of connecting words like more-over, however and furthermore. And that is when they lose the audience.

Long sentences
Because the sentences are too long, and they have not committed the talk to memory, they start searching for words and lots of uhm and ahs appear as by black magic. Granted, a few uhms and ahs are o.k. but when your story is full of those filler words listening quickly becomes tedious.
Sometime other filler words appear, Dutch filler words such as JA or Hè, making you sound insecure and asking for validation. Your cadence, your pace go out the window and the interest of you audience goes with it.

Structure, style & retorical devices
A vital ingredient of my work is to work with the speaker on the structure and style of their talk. Usually that means re-crafting the entire speech from beginning to end.

It's like a sculpture that gets more and more definition as time goes on.
The best way to do this is in a co-creational process with the speaker. This is not always possible. Sometimes I reconstruct the message of the speaker using short sentences, retorical devices such as asking a question, the rule of three and the rule of repetition and in a relatively short time you have a talk with drama, a talk with speed, a talk with impact.
We make sure it has equal doses of Logos, Ethos and Pathos. 
Once the speaker agrees that the new speech is indeed articulating the essence of their message the practising can begin.

Practising the Talk; first reading aloud
The speaker practices reading the story aloud. During this process the text is adapted, tweaked and massaged so every word counts and is in exactly the right spot so the sentence can be spoken without running out of breath or tripping over words.

 
I listen for pronunciation -For many Dutch speakers the pronunciation of the -th- is tricky. Is often becomes an -s- as in sink, meaning think, or a -d- as in modder, meaning mother or a -t- as in smootie meaning smoothie.
The other pronunciation challenge for many Dutch speakers is the pronunciation of the short vowel sounds; the -a- as in hat, the -u- as in but, the -o- as in pot. Most Dutch speakers speak these vowel sounds in the front of their mouth creating these typical Dutch polder sounds.
With some awareness and practice they learn to pull the corners of their mouth backward thus achieving the perfect pronunciation.
Another challenge are the final sounds -d- and -t-.
bat - bed   
hat - had
rat - fad
The first ones having hard sounding -t's- at the end. The second ones sounding soft. ddddd
And finally the so-called tongue twisters; words of three syllables or more like prepostrous, obnoxious. individual, identity, improvisation etc.
To pronounce these words properly you need to know where the emphasis is. So we practise them in kindergarten fashion; by pronouncing each syllable separately and clapping them with the pronounced emphasis where it belongs. We exagerate the sounds at first until the articulatory settings are reset.

I make a sound file of the challenging words in the talk so the speaker can rehearse in the car and on the go using their smart phone or their iPad.

I also type the words in a big font size with the parts that are emphasized typed in bold like:
Emphasis, preposterous, obnoxious, individual, identity, improvisation etc.
Plus I bold the words in the sentence where the sentence stress should be. Usually the words with the most meaning. Like so.
After the first reading I jot down the words that need extra pronunciation practice.

Line-by-line reading; listen and repeat after me
We conclude the session with a line by line reading in the age old listen and repeat fashion.
I read each sentence with the proper word and sentence stress and pauses and the speaker repeats after me.
This concludes the first session typically lasting froam 90 minutes to 180 minutes.
The speaker practices the speech at home and ideally commits it to memory. Yes people, knows it by heart, inside and out. How to do this read the book The Memory Palace by Joshua Foer. It just came out in translation. There's nothing wrong with committing a speech or a talk to memory. Which is not to say you have to tell it verbatim when you present it. No, you don’t want to memorize the speech, you want to embody the message. That is an entirely different thing.

2nd session
Ideally we have another session to fine tune the presentation in terms of:
- Vocal Variety
- Body Language
- Facial Expression
- Volume
- Cadence
- Pacing
- Power


Generally speaking the speaker can turn up the volume, vocal variety, gestures and expression depending on the size of the venue. Big venue, big gestures, expression and volume.
Make sure to practice with a good mike and someone who can finetune the mike to suit the voice.
Dutch speakers are often afraid to overdo it, but truly on a big stage you may have to exaggerate. You want the people in the back of the space to be equally enthralled. Project your voice to the last speakers in the audience and do the same with your eye contact even if you can't see them.
I also teach the speakers a way of channeling their energy, to release nervous energy and collect
energy needed to get the message accross.

Skype coaching sessions
If time permits and distance is an issue we have a final skype session, with the images of the presentation in place. We discuss the images and the fonts uses on the slides.
Images should be clear and in high resolution with maximal impact. They should also be free of rights.
Fonts should be big so few words are used on the slides. The fewer the better.

European champion Humorous Speech Contest
My Toastmaster coachee, with whom I have been working of and on for a few years won the Dutch national championship Humorous Speech with her perfectly calibrated speech Shopping at 30.000 feet'. She will now present the European championships in Basel in a few weeks.

My TEDxDelft clients will have their Dress Rehearsal tomorrow in the cavernous Aula at the University's conference center. TEDxDelft is taking place on Monday, November 7th. Theirs is also a competition of sorts. It has no medals or certificates but the possibility of their TEDTalk being published on the TED.com channel were it will be seen by millions of ted fans all over the world is in itself a big prize.

For me it will be interesting to see how my work with them translates on to that big stage and onto the video. 
For TEDxDelft I worked with three different people; different in age, background and personality. 
How will their presentation stack up against the speakers who received no coaching, or were coached by a different coach. 
Will I see a positive difference? I can't wait to see. 

I hope my speakers have now committed their talk to memory and get a good nights sleep
Monday I want them to feel fit and rested and ready to shine having the Talk of their Life!

 

Nieuw: TEDTalk Training voor mensen die hun ideëen willen delen in helder Engels

 

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Heb jij een fantastisch goed idee dat je met de wereld wilt delen?

Waar kan je dat beter doen dan op een TEDx podium. De TEDx evenementen schieten als paddestoelen uit de grond. Dit najaar staan er maar liefst acht TEDx evenmenten op de agenda in Nederland alleen. Enthousiasme en ideëen te over blijkbaar. Dat is geweldig. 

Maar met een goed idee ben je er nog niet. Hoe ga jij dat idee omzetten in een dynamisch, duidelijke en gepassioneerd Engels verhaal. Die taal blijkt toch vaak een struikelblok zoals ik dat al hier al eerder heb besproken. Om de vertaalslag te kunnen maken moet je veel werk verzetten. Heel veel werk. 

Ik kan je daarbij helpen. In de maanden oktober en november geeft ik een tweetal trainingen, TEDTalk Trainingen, speciaal voor ambitieuze mensen die hun verhaal op een TED podium of op een ander internationaal evenement willen vertellen. In puntgaaf Engels, met precies de juiste woorden en een structuur waardoor de boodschap niet alleen aankomt maar ook wordt onthouden. 

In vier sessies van vier uur verdeeld over vier weken help ik 6 mensen om de talk van hun leven te maken en te geven. Op woensdag 29 september van 19 - 21 uur ben je van harte welkom bij Igluu DenHaag voor een gratis informatieavond met een korte workshop om je te laten kennismaken met mijn aanpak en methoden. Je kunt je dan ook inschrijven voor een van de twee trainingen. 

Hieronder vind je de flyer met daarin een link naar het reserveringsformulier voor de informatieavond. De avond zelf is gratis maar je betaalt €5 euro die je weer terugkrijgt op de avond zelf. Dit om het fenomeen no show te minimaliseren ;-) 

Deel deze informatie met jouw ambitieuze, creatieve, inspirerende vrienden en noteel de datum: woensdag, 29 september bij Igluu om 19 uur. 

Tot dan, 

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Co-creating TEDxTheHagueLIVE; a Labor of Love

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TEDxTheHagueLIVE is history.

 What went down?

  • Seven local speakers spoke about their passion.
  • TEDGlobal2011 speakers were simulcast from Edinburgh
  • 150 guests listened intently to all speakers 
  • 250 wholesome, delicious meals were prepared and eaten 
  • 500 cups of coffee were   
  • 300 cups of tea  
  • 150 glasses of powershots
  • 150 gifts changed hands 
  • 200+ people went home on Wednesday July 13th feeling inspired and uplifted.
  • The pictures are posted on Flickr and Facebook
  • Thank you letters to sponsors and suppliers have been mailed. 
  • The  colorful bouquets  have been picked up, odds & ends returned.
  • 9 Videos were published on YouTube

There was no bugdet and all of the services, food, printing etc was paid for by third parties or given in kind.  

 From the beginning TEDxTheHague was a co-creation, jointly created by  a group of dedicated men and women ranging in age from 19 - 67.

 

We all shared the idea that it could be done and that it could be done well. We were right!

We pulled it together in six weeks. 

We used Twitter and Facebook to freach and encourage a diverse group of guests to apply for an invite.

We used email to invite them. Attendance was free.

We used Google to find sponsors and partners.

We used a Google group to keep everyone in the loop. 

We wrote, edited and shared Google documents for our press releases, speech edits, letters, lists and spread sheets.

 

Did we meet each other in person? 

 We sure did! 

We had 5 face2face meetings at Igluu including the one on the day of the event and an evaluation afterwards.  

We met with prospective teammembers, speakers, sponsors and food suppliers in various cafe’s, from Bagels & Beans, Tennispark 

Berg & Dal and the Pulchri cafe to Hotel des Indes. We also met at the homes of the various teammembers. 

 We shared our vision of having a party with substance and style  and we did! 

 

July 13th was D-day.  It rained cats & dogs but that was okay. People came and stayed. People connected with each other, they were inspired, they ate and drank and chose a gift from the gift table.It was pretty close to perfect. 

But... there is always room for improvement. What did we learn?

We learned that:  

- Speakers need more editing, more coaching and more practice time. 

Especially when they are non-native English speakers. Presenting in a language not your own is a huge challenge. When you take up this challenge you must commit to putting in the work that is required. Als a TEDX speaker you are not only speaking in another language, with that language also comes a whole other style of presenting. It takes time to make that adjustment. 

 Watch our speakers here.
  What do you think about their Talks? 

- When using images, sound or film segments speakers need to embed this material into the presentation they submit. They also need to submit their presentation at least 5 days before the event so corrections can be implemented and tested and the transitions will be smooth. 

 - Speakers should make every effort to be present during the course of the day and connect with the guests. This is an integral part of any TED gathering and is enjoyable for the speaker as well as the guests.

-  All contributing parties must adhere to the theTEDx branding guidelines.Have someone take on the role of branding inspector.  

-  When working with multiple suppliers of food, make sure you have the names, email addresses and websites in order at least a week ahead of time so no sponsor or supplier will fall by the way side. It is important to acknowledge every sponsor, every volunteer. 

Will we organize another TEDxTheHague?  

 Yes we will.

  • People like to be inspired and so do we.
  • It was great fun to be involved and meet so many wonderful people.
  • Participating in a successful co-creation is exhilarating.
  • Nothing feels better than being involved in a labor of love. 


 - Do you want to be part of this exciting process? Please go to our page on facebook: TEDxTheHague.

- Do you want to partner with us, or sponsor TEDxTheHague? Please mail us at tedxthehague@gmail.com

 

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TEDxTheHague; the story behind it.

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Late August 2008 I went to a TEDTalks gathering at S2M in Utrecht. The meeting was organized by Jasper van Impelen. I had discovered the TEDTalks a few months before this through a lexicographer named Erin McKean who wrote about TED - and the dress she made for the occassion - on her blog A Dress a Day. I saw the Talk and I was hooked.To this day Erin's TEDTalk is one of my favorites.

I thought it would be nice to connect with other TED fans so I made the trip to Seats2Meet.  We were about eight people and spent an enjoyble afternoon watching Sir Ken Robinson with his famous talk Does Education kill Creativity and a few others, which I am ashamed to say, I don't remember. Jaap Spronks was there, Annet Struik and Eric Haas and a few other folks. 

In September, going home after a game of Apples to Apples at Tennispark Berg & Dal near my flat in The Hague I asked my pal Ralph Oei, who I knew was also a fan of TED, if he was interested in starting a TED Club. We could meet every month on Sunday afternoon to watch three selected TED videos loosely chosen around a theme and invite a bunch of people to watch them with us and talk about what we saw. Ralph liked the idea, I asked the people at Tennispark Berg & Dal if we could use their space and they said yes.

The rest was easy. Ralph picked the first three videos, wrote an invitation, downloaded the videos and we set up the beamer, the laptop and the screen in the attic at the tennisclub. On person showed up, a fellow Toastmaster with a Ph.D. in Biomedical Science. We watched 3 TEDTalks related to the Power of Words: Chis Abani -  from him I learned the meaning about the word Ubuntu - , Rick Smolan I - about a photo reportage he made about a Amerasian girl many years ago and an adoption- and Music - Benjamin Zander about shiny eyes, the power of classical music. We were all moved by the Talks and talked about them for a long time, or so it seemed. 

Despite the small audience we tought our afternoon a big succes. 

Or next meeting drew more visitors. It was a snowy Sunday in November. We met at the Gallery, a different space filled with art work and had a nice view. It was very cold. I had to run home to fetch ponchos and blankets. Luckily the onion soup and bitterballen kept us warm and the Talks and conversation were excellent.

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 And so for almost a year we met once a month on the second Sunday of the month until Berg & Dal kicked us out of the Gallery. We me at my house once or twice and in July 2009 we moved our TEDxTheHague Salon to Berg Kleijn Communicatie, an advertising communications agency in The Hague. I had worked there briefly 10 years ago but kept in touch with one of the owners. He liked the idea of a monthly salon andTEDxTheHague started meeting there every second Friday of the month. Ralph and I took turns choosing the videos and the themes. We started experimenting with live talks. I presented my talk The Power of Sound; Richard Wagner in Seven Minutes, Rachelle Eerhart talked to us about No Impact Week last November.  Other regulars stepped up to the plate.  Attendance  has been growing steadily ever since; a diverse, international group of people sometimes coming from far beyond The Hague.

The last couple of meetings have been at full capacity with Henry Soenarko,  one of our Berg Kleijn hosts,  along with Peter van den Berg, hauling chairs from other offices.It has become a tradition that guests bring their favorite snacks to share. We are very curious to see how this will play with a gathering of 150 - 200 people on July 13th.

 

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Meanwhile, at the beginning of 2009 at the TED headquarters in NYC curator Chris Anderson had come up with the TEDx concept.  TEDx, independently organized TED events, and suddenly things got a lot more 'official. We needed a logo with an x, and we had to deal with administrative issues. But TEDx took off and how. Recently the 2000th TEDx event took place. The TEDx development is not going to stop any time soon.TEDx has become a global phenomenon. The TEDx events also brings new discoveries and new speakers to the attention of the TED headquarters and so the ideas keep on spreading.

As 'veteran' TED organizers we were given the license for TEDxTheHague without any problems. Jim Stolze, another Dutch TED fan,  wanted to meet with us before he started organizing his big TEDxAmsterdam event in November 2009. I think he was pretty keen on having the TEDx scoop in The Netherlands but, truth be told, thàt honor belongs to Jasper van Impelen.

A few months ago we were given the opportunity to simulcast the TEDTalks from TEDGlobal2011 from Edinburgh.We thought about it and we thought: Why Not? Lets do it! We decided on a semi large event, no more than 150 guests, 200 max,  including volunteers, caterers, SPEAKERS and sponsors. If all went well we could consider a large TEDxTheHague event later on.

This was a great opportunity to invite local speakers. Igluu was happy to make their new larger spaces available. Filmer Edo van Santen immediately said YES when I called him with the idea. The speakers all said yes, except one. Here we are with a program of seven local speakers and 16 speakers who will come to us all the way from Edinburgh on the screen on July 13th.

Kathy Voyles, a dynamic lady from New Zealand, who lives in The Hague and has a passion for food and cooking, is our head of the catering team besides being one of the speakers. I am impressed with  the number of people she has been able to mobilize in a very short time.

Wine has been ordered and the bill will be paid by DPI.nl, an amazing animation house in Scheveningen. Bagels & Beans hopped on and we hope sponsors for printing, banners, beer and coffee will present themselves in the next two weeks. We figure we need a modest budget of around €1000 to cover all the bases. The event itself will be free for the guests, the speakers, the space, the video, everything is given freely in the spirit of ideas worth sharing.

Requests for invitations are coming in at a steady clip and I know we will have a wonderful party on July 13th, a party with substance, style, good food and music!

 

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Be part of it, request your invite and tell your friends! http://ymlp.com/xgewwbbbgmguy

And,  by all means, if you want to contribute by becoming a sponsor, get in touch with us. tedxthehague@gmail.com or 0642905484. We will send you a presentation outlining how your company can benefit from being associated with TEDxTheHagueLIVE.

 

 

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TEDxTheHagueLIVE & the Art of Public Speaking

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On Wednesday July 13 the first TEDxTheHagueLIVE will take place at Igluu Den Haag.

 

The speakers

As an educator, coach and a champion of Public Speaking you can imagine how excited I am about this event. Not only because it will be the first, and hopefully not the last, bigger TEDx event in The Hague,  but because we will have seven local speakers who will give their first TED Talk live in front of what I hope is going to be a diverse audience. Our seven live speakers cover a wide spectrum, from music & science to art, agriculture and the significance of food, eating & movement on our quality of life. The speakers themselves are diverse in terms of age, they range from 70+ to 20+, four men and three women. Their background is equally diverse: some of them are well-known, even famous, others have asmaller local following. Most of them are Dutch with the exception of Kathy Voyles who comes  from New Zealand.  She has been a long-term resident of The Hague. Eva Maria Westbroek travels the world and has sung before large, international audiences at big opera houses in Europe and the USA. Some have spoken only before much smaller groups in Dutch. All speakers share an enthousiasm for TED and are excited about being part of the first larger TEDxTheHague event. In addition to Eva Maria and  Westbroek and her father, Professor Peter Westbroek and Kathy Voyles you will meet:

Merlijn Twaalfhoven, composer/conductor

Martin Sjardijn, virtual reality artist

Rachelle Eerhart, urban garderner & no impact activits

Richard de Ruijter, fitness specialist


TED Talk, the talk of your life 

What makes TEDxTheHagueLIVE so special is that this diverse group will be giving the Talk of their Life, at a TEDx event.  They will be filmed by Edo van Santen, from Talk&Do.TV, a super professional who brings with him a whole crew of volunteer filmers.  All live talks will be uploaded  to the special YouTube TEDTalks where they will be shared with the worldwide TED audience of millions of people, all across the globe. The videos will be seen by the people behind TED, most notably Chris Anderson, the curator, who selects the speakers for the two large TED conferences held every year, in the USA and the UK. There is a possibility that some of our local speakers may eventually be speaking on a much larger, international podium. To date this had only happened to a few select Dutch TED speakers; Christien Meindertsma and Marcel Dicke.  They both spoke at TEDGlobal2010 in Oxford after having presented earlier at TEDxAmsterdam in November 2009.

Public Speaking in The Netherlands

Other Dutch TEDx speakers haven't made it to those larger TED conferences. Why? Did their presentation not pass muster? Was it the content not orginal enough? Or did their delivery lack in fluency and panache? Who knows? We do know that TEDx speakers have to have a compelling idea or story, an engaging style of delivery and a passion for their topic. Their speech can be quirky, humorous, serious, radical, original or thought provoking.This is why TED Talks are so incredibly popular all over the world.

A tall order?

Yes indeed.

Words

Speaking in front of a group is not for everybody. It requires a lot of hard work and practice. Somebody said, the shorter the speech, the longer it takes to prepare. In that sense a speech is like a sculpture. A sculpture made of words. The words are strung along, shifted about, edited, added and subtrackted until every word counts and all superfluous words are omitted.

Delivery

Then the work on the delivery starts. The shaping of the sounds, the intonation, rythm and pacing. The pauses and the tempo. Body language, facial expressions, movement and breath all play a role in a delivery. Yes it is a Talk, but it is much more than that, it is a performance, a piece of art.

The TEDxTheHagueLIVE speakers have a whole month to prepare. They are also given the opportunity to work with a speech coach who helps them with the organization and the delivery of their talk. The speech coaches are all experience toastmasters who are themselves excellent speakers and know the ins and outs of creating compelling stories in English.They all have put in the 10.000 hours it takes to become proficient.

The TEDxTheHague speakers podium

So I am excited to be able to offer a podium to these seven people who all have an important and compelling message having to do with The Stuff of Life. I do know they all feel passionate about their topic. I konw they will dazzle the audience and, if all goes well, they will dazlle a lot more people beyond the 200 or so lucky ones to be there in the room while they speak.

TEDxTheHagueLIVE; a co-creation by an enthusiastic team

And so, in organizing this TEDxTheHagueLIVE event, together with an enthusiastic team of volunteers and helped by geneours sponsors like Igluu, Berg Kleijn Communicatie, Edo van Santen, Kathy Voyles and many othes, I feel confident that we will be able to have some of our local speakers make it to the next round in TED land. It fits closely with my personal passion to elevate the Art of Public Speaking to a higher level. I am happy to be able to provide a podium for some of the most interesting and passionate people in our midst and I know it won't be the last time TEDxTheHague will do so.

If you haven't already, please request an invitation to TEDxTheHagueLIFE here:  Notifications will be sent out by July 7th so don't wait too long to indicate your interest. 

 

 

 

 

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Spontaan of Steengoed Spreken (in het Engels) ? The Choice is Yours!

 


Global Speakers Summit 2011, Noordwijk aan Zee

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Op 14,15, en 16 april was ik aanwezig bij de Global Speakers Summit 2011 in Hotel Huis ter Duin in Noordwijk aan Zee. 
Ruim 200 professionele sprekers kwamen bij elkaar om van elkaar te leren, elkaar te inspireren, te netwerken en over het vak van spreker te praten.
De Global Speakers Summit vindt plaats om de twee jaar.  Dit jaar in Nederland en in 2013 in Vancouver. De Nederlandse Professionele Sprekers Associatie had de taak om het congres te organiseren. Hans Ruinemans, oprichter van de PSA Nederland was de motor achter de organisatie samen met Judith Moonen van Moonen Congres Organisatie.

Het merendeel van de congresgangers was afkomstig uit  de Verenigde Staten, Canada en het Verenigd Koninkrijk. Dat is logisch omdat het 'public speaking' in die landen op een hoog niveau staat. Maar er waren ook sprekers uit Duitsland en Frankrijk. Naar schatting zo’n 50 congresgangers kwamen uit Nederland en België. 

Nederlandse sprekers op een internationaal podium

Van die vijftig Nederlanders durfden zo’n vijftien het aan om hun verhaal in het Engels te vertellen.
Ze verdienen allen een pluim voor hun moed en gotspe.
Echter, het contrast tussen de presentaties van de 'native speakers' en die van de Nederlandse sprekers was groot qua stijl, zeggingskracht, organisatie van het materiaal en wat ook wel genoemd wordt podium craft. 
Veel Nederlandse sprekers hadden niet goed nagedacht over wat er allemaal bij komt kijken om ook in het Engels boeiend en overtuigend over te komen. Ook leken zij zich niet bewust te zijn van wat voor indruk zij zouden maken bij een internationaal publiek. 
Bij het onderdeel de S-Factor, waarin 7 sprekers deelnamen met een speech van drie minuten blonken vier sprekers uit door hun inhoud en presentatie. Zij waren allen lid van een Nederlandse of BelgischeToastmasters club. 

Ook sprekers Hans van Grieken, corporate speaker at Capgemini ,Wubbo Ockels, astronaut en voorvechter van Happy Energy en cultureel antropologe Jitske Kramer boeiden het publiek en ontvingen staande ovaties. Allen zijn ervaren sprekers, ook in het Engels.

Over voorbereiding en oefening

Veel andere Nederlandse sprekers hadden zich onvoldoende voorbereid.
Hierdoor kwamen hun speeches niet uit de verf.
Wat mankeerde eraan?
1. Gebrek aan structuur, rammelend verhaal, onduidelijke boodschap
2. Onbeholpen taalgebruik
Misverstanden door slechte uitspraak, woordkeus of beide (sink ipv think, fantasy ipv imagination)

Veel van de Nederlandse showcase sprekers hadden best leuke verhalen maar door de taalbarrière bleven hun presentaties onder de maat. De sprekers hadden zich wel voorbereid, maar hun voorbereiding was niet genoeg om de vertaalslag naar een internationaal podium te maken.

Bij het prepareren van een speech in een taal die niet je moedertaal is komt n.l. heel veel kijken.

Boeiend spreken in het Engels, hoe doe je dat?

Waar moet je zoal aan denken om jouw verhaal ook in het Engels te laten boeien.
Hieronder geeft ik een aantal tips die je kunt toepassen om jouw verhaal op een internationaal podium goed voor het voetlicht te brengen.


Denk na

Wat is de gelegenheid?
Wie zitten er in het publiek?
Wat is jouw boodschap voor dìt publiek?
Wat wil je dat je gehoor achteraf over jou zegt?
Twintig minuten is de optimale duur van een presentatie. Duurt je verhaal veel langer dan moet je wel heel erg goed of beroemd zijn want je publiek haakt af. Niet voor niets zijn de TED talks maximaal 18 minuten.

Het schrijfproces

Rangschik je ideeën.
Bepaal je hoofdgedachte
Waar gaat jouw verhaal over?
Vat je hoofdboodschap samen in 200 woorden maximaal. Dat is je kernboodschap.
Schrijf je speech direct in het Engels. Vertaal niet uit het Nederlands.
Doe je dit wel, laat het vertaalde verhaal herschrijven door een native speaker die goed kan schrijven.
Gebruik vanaf het begin Spreektaal. Spreektaal is kort en bondig en de zinnen zijn kort. Denk maar aan Barak Obama.  Schrijftaal is omslachtig.
Schrijf zinnen zonder verbindingswoorden en bijzinnen.
Componeer voor elke gedachte een nieuwe zin.
Gebruik de actieve vorm ofwel in de o.t.t.of in de o.vt. De actieve vorm vertelt wie er iets doet. Niet wat er gedaan wordt.
Laat dus het onderwerp de actie uitvoeren: Ik gaf de bal een geweldige mep! De zaal ging uit zijn dak.
 Gebruik concrete woorden en en vermijd jargon of ingewikkelde woorden.
Maak het makkelijk voor je gehoor om te begrijpen wat je zegt.
Maak veelvuldig gebruik van retorische stijlfiguren. HIerover meer later.

Hoeveel woorden is genoeg?

Een verhaal van 18 - 20 minuten heeft rond de 1000 woorden. Dat is ongeveer vier of vijf A-4tjes. Native speakers die niet over de uitspraak, klemtoon en lastige woorden hoeven na te denken spreken sneller maar een non native speaker heeft meer tijd nodig om alle klanken helder uit te spreken.


200 woorden in 90-120 seconden

Geef extra aandacht aan je opening.
Leer de eerste 200 woorden van je opening uit je hoofd.
Ja, echt helemaal uit je hoofd, zodat je de opening eruit kunt knallen. Boem!
Vlgs Chris Davidson, in zijn boekje Succesful Speaking Secrets,  heb je nl maar 90 seconden dat is anderhalve minuut, om de aandacht van je publiek te pakken èn te behouden.

Als jij je toehoorders niet binnen die anderhalve minuut weet te pakken dan haken ze af en ben je ze kwijt. Ze gaan met hun smartphone spelen, uit het raam staren, ze maken in gedachten een boodschappenlijst. Of ze gaan lachen waar het niet moet. In het  ergste geval lopen ze weg.
‘Uhs’ en ‘ahs’ en langdradige openingen zijn uit den boze. Evenals muziek of een liedje. Dan gaan de mensen meezingen of wachten tot het klaar is. Daarmee verspeel je kostbare minuten  die je aan jouw boodschap had kunnen besteden.


Neem je verhaal op

Spreek je tekst uit en neem je verhaal op (video of audio)
Opnemen is cruciaal. Je wilt jezelf in ieder geval horen maar liever nog zien.
Maak dus een video of een geluidsopname.
Kijk, of luister vervolgens naar je verhaal.
Meestal zie je meteen wat niet werkt.
Maak aantekeningen.
Ga schrappen. Alles wat niet bijdraagt aan de kernboodschap, weg ermee.
Kill you darlings!
Het allerbeste is om een tekstredacteur met uitstekende kennis van het Engels en van de Angelsaksische cultuur jouw tekst te laten redigeren. Je zult versteld staan hoeveel tekst er geschrapt gaat worden.
Pas je tekst aan en doe dat net zo lang tot die tekst loopt als een trein.
Denk aan pauzes,
Adem in, adem uit, adem in en spreek pas dan.
Stiltes zijn goed.
Als er een stilte valt gaat iedereen weer opletten. Ze willen weten wat er komen gaat.

Over spontaan spreken

Nederlanders willen graag 'spontaan' overkomen. Ze willen vooral niet 'gelikt' zijn. Dat vinden ze vaak zo 'Amerikaans'. Maar de meeste Nederlandse sprekers hebben nog een lange weg te gaan voordat hun verhaal 'gelikt' zal klinken.
Heel vaak heb ik de afgelopen dagen weer gehoord dat de Nederlandse sprekers niets uit hun hoofd willen leren omdat ze bang zijn niet ‘spontaan’ over te komen.
 In negen van de tien gevallen ga je met dat spontane verhaal totaal de mist in. Je gaat hakkelen, zoekt naar woorden, kan de juiste woorden niet vinden of spreekt ze verkeerd uit. Je verknalt de tijd van je publiek. Dat publiek voelt namelijk haarfijn aan dat je je voordracht niet goed hebt voorbereid. Zoals Malcolm Gladwell zegt in zijn boek Outliers, uitmuntendheid is het resultaatvan 10.000 uur oefenen en herhalen. Zoals topartiesten, musici, topatleten en Steve Jobs blijven oefenen en trainen om de allerbeste te zijn, moet ook jij als spreker blijven oefenen en bijslijpen.
Reken maar uit. Hoeveel uur heb jij nog te gaan? Oefening baart Kunst.
 
Het hoeft niet perfect!

Dat je je tekst uit je hoofd leert wil nog niet zeggen dat je die tekst verbatim gaan uitspreken. Dan doet alleen acteurs. Maar je moet die tekst wèl in je hoofd hebben.
Wanneer dat het geval is heb je n.l. geen last meer van uhs, ahs en ums of van hè’s, you knows en andere storende stopwoorden. Je weet precies wat er komen gaat. Als je iets vergeet of het anders vertelt is er nog niets aan de hand want niemand, behalve misschien je speechcoach, kent de originele tekst. Ga je dus ook nooit verontschuldigen of vertellen hoe ‘nervous’ je bent. Daaraan herkent men de amateurspreker. Nee, helaas, excuses zijn niet charmant.

Hoe ambitieus ben jij?

Dus ben jij een ambitieuze ondernemer, ambtenaar of artiest en wil je ook op een internationaal podium je verhaal vertellen?
Denk er dan goed over na: Spontaan of Steengoed? De keus is aan jou.

 

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Yolanthe Smit - Uitgesproken Engels
Speech- & Presentatiecoach gespecialiseerd in Engelse presentaties

Alles over spreken in het openbaar en het gesproken woord, de retorica, pathos, logos, ethos etc.

Voor mijn specialisme: Uitgesproken Engels, kijk op http://uitgesprokenengels.posterous.com/

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